Daniel Bui – 4:01, dramatic short, action/thriller
A woman comes home to find her husband murdered and a cryptic note left behind. She uses her special skills to track the killers and exact her own brand of justice.
Really nice video. You have done really well and you must have given some serious effort in the production. The audio is nice too.
Things I would revise:
-Have a clearer message to what The Wife is doing after she sees her husband dead, the clues that she uses in order to find her killers. Should’ve had a shot showing what she’s doing on the computer, maybe a shot of her finding the killer’s house on online maps
-Better establishing shot of the murder scene at the beginning and the killer’s house
-At the long death scene, I should’ve have used a 1/8″ plug in corded microphone. That ruined the sound and was hard to hear the actors speak. The bluetooth microphones were all rented out, so I had to make the best of what I had.
-A little bit of a lighting issue in the beginning, should’ve focused more on white balance. But the darkness was a little intentional, to start the video as a dark themed and toned video.
-Should’ve fixed the shot/reverse shot at the kill scene between Thug #1 and Wife. Broke the 180-axis rule
-Sometimes the soundtrack dominates the voice from the actors. Needed to fix the audio levels better
Otherwise, I think I did great on all three phases of producing a video. Spent a good amount of hours on post production. I had a great variety in shot selection. Clear narrative. Funny acting!
Very well put together. you must have put a lot of work into this it shows. well scripted and even nice acting! great job
I really liked the variety and range of shots you used! You were able to convey a strong narrative with each shot having a purpose made clear to the viewer. The lighting was pretty good but could have been a little better lit at times but overall it looked great. The audio was also good too.
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