I think I did a good job, and the story should be impressive. Fortunately, the weather is good, so I don’ t need to worry about lighting exterior. In addition, my actors were a little bit nervous in the first scene, but they feel more natural in the second and third scene.
I like your story, the ending is very impressive! Maybe you should give more shots to the men who sits on the floor, he feels annoying several times and finally complain. After he realized that the lady is blind, his face express might changed to show his inter feelings.
I think I did a good job, and the story should be impressive. Fortunately, the weather is good, so I don’ t need to worry about lighting exterior. In addition, my actors were a little bit nervous in the first scene, but they feel more natural in the second and third scene.
Good work! I like the music that you used for the sad feeling.
Also, you used diverse shooting angels in it.
Overall, well done.
I like your story, the ending is very impressive! Maybe you should give more shots to the men who sits on the floor, he feels annoying several times and finally complain. After he realized that the lady is blind, his face express might changed to show his inter feelings.