Nice story line. I really like the lighting and camera angles here. The ending really breaks my heart, and it also means I understand what you try to express to the audiences. The only thing might need to improve is to avoid the shaky camera. Well done!
Really nice! the only problem is sound for dialogue is too low
Nice job! There are many range of shots and good lighting . It would be better if the sound for the dialogue can be louder and reduce the noise.
Overall, Great work on the background music and the attractive story -line.
Nice story line. I really like the lighting and camera angles here. The ending really breaks my heart, and it also means I understand what you try to express to the audiences. The only thing might need to improve is to avoid the shaky camera. Well done!