Matt Owens – 3:10, comedy short
An entire afternoon spent looking for a precious, lost item. Where could it be?
Dude, I thought that your work was great. Simple story executed really well. I enjoyed the piece a lot. Especially with the girl dancing in the bathroom and the random guy in the car. There was probably one audio problem but that was it. Everything else was really good. Keep it up.
I would have liked to have made it longer, but obviously strayed from my original production plan. I’m pretty happy overall with the lighting, sound, editing, white balance, etc. I tried to push myself in terms of different shots and more dialogue and was overall pretty happy with how it came out. I don’t know what I could have changed to make the “story” more clear or how to enhance the overall narrative, besides perhaps adding a little more dialogue in the middle to not only make it longer but to add more depth to the overall story.
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