Devin Jordan – 5:12, comedy short
A man struggles to get his creative juices flowing for a video project but can’t seem to get started.
What is said in your description does not come across in your video. Also your first scene is to long and needs to be shortened. In most but not all your shots you used the rule of thirds. In addition why did you use no dialogue in this video? Good luck on your future film endeavors.
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