Really great job on developing the story. Very well executed. Nice range of shots and set up to the actual climax in the film. The audio got a little muffled when shot downtown, but overall nice job!
Great job with the story. Lighting we good throughout the whole film. Like Evan stated, the audio was a bit inconsistent and the quality changed in different scenes. It is difficult to get great audio quality in a busy city setting, especially Pike’s Place Market but I think a Bluetooth mic could have picked up better audio quality. Also, on Final Cut X, there is a section where you can mess with the audio levels in every aspect to help make it more clear and rid of any extra unnecessary noises. Otherwise, great job! Funny twist at the end.
The storyline was simple but good. I would agree that the audio was inconsistent and the voices weren’t very prominent. Otherwise, lighting and transitions were good. One scene was a bit shaky but great job overall! The ending had a funny twist.
First of all, I liked the story it looks like you had fun going to downtown and film as a tourist. However, it seems like you don’t have a lot of dialogues except for the scene where you talk to the other girl tourist who steals your camera later. Anyway, nice range of shots, and transitions seemed good, too. Nice use of tripod on most scenes. I feel like you could’ve improved the audio because when you were outside I couldn’t hear a lot and I heard a lot of background noise. Also, I was wondering if you used white balance or not. Other than that, everything else looks good. Good story man!
-Jayson Chung
Really great job on developing the story. Very well executed. Nice range of shots and set up to the actual climax in the film. The audio got a little muffled when shot downtown, but overall nice job!
Great job with the story. Lighting we good throughout the whole film. Like Evan stated, the audio was a bit inconsistent and the quality changed in different scenes. It is difficult to get great audio quality in a busy city setting, especially Pike’s Place Market but I think a Bluetooth mic could have picked up better audio quality. Also, on Final Cut X, there is a section where you can mess with the audio levels in every aspect to help make it more clear and rid of any extra unnecessary noises. Otherwise, great job! Funny twist at the end.
The storyline was simple but good. I would agree that the audio was inconsistent and the voices weren’t very prominent. Otherwise, lighting and transitions were good. One scene was a bit shaky but great job overall! The ending had a funny twist.
First of all, I liked the story it looks like you had fun going to downtown and film as a tourist. However, it seems like you don’t have a lot of dialogues except for the scene where you talk to the other girl tourist who steals your camera later. Anyway, nice range of shots, and transitions seemed good, too. Nice use of tripod on most scenes. I feel like you could’ve improved the audio because when you were outside I couldn’t hear a lot and I heard a lot of background noise. Also, I was wondering if you used white balance or not. Other than that, everything else looks good. Good story man!
-Jayson Chung