Good job Cheryl, surprised to see that your cut is kind of different from Evan’s. Comparing to Evan, without music, it’s even more intensive and serious. There’s only one thing to be improved which is the conversation in the beginning is kind of in distance/a little bit unclear.
Good, structured storyline. I enjoyed the humor of it. For the most part, the audio is consistent but can be a little improved with the outside noise in the beginning. Transitions flowed and it was intriguing to see the difference in the editing between you and your partner. Overall, job well done.
The beginning needed some sort of music and the sound is going up and down. Your both are hilarious! I am kind of confused by the cuts.
Good job Cheryl, surprised to see that your cut is kind of different from Evan’s. Comparing to Evan, without music, it’s even more intensive and serious. There’s only one thing to be improved which is the conversation in the beginning is kind of in distance/a little bit unclear.
Good, structured storyline. I enjoyed the humor of it. For the most part, the audio is consistent but can be a little improved with the outside noise in the beginning. Transitions flowed and it was intriguing to see the difference in the editing between you and your partner. Overall, job well done.